[MLP] Lowa Mei (AT)

As with most of your work I think your use of colour and design sense is really good.
I like the reflection in the eyes of the ghosts and the legs on your character look like they would work standing up.
I like how the circle cut out to the right echos the head of the character. It really helps to create balance.
Your compositions are clean and impactful.

I say this as a fan of your work and somebody who follows you…
Your work would be WAY better if you could choose a consistent light source.
The shadows and highlights going in many different directions which takes away from the depth of your character.
If you look at the hair, I could guess the position of the moon, but eye reflections seem to come from the left and there is no shadow from the hair over the face. There is no shadow from your character or the grass, but the rocks in the background have shadow in a different direction. The hills have light coming from the left.

Shading is really fun! Don’t be afraid to destroy your picture while exploring light and shadow. I promise it will give you a whole new range to your work.